Sure that was something
A little too animeish for my taste, it was kinda obvious where all was going. The blind guy out of the sudden just say I'm from another planet, in a team, planet needs your help, evil bad guy. The thing is that this story is not attractive (well actually this movie as a trailer/prologue is not) could need some pulishing.
By now your animation were really good what happened here, looked like you had a need to get this one done quickly.
Try to give everyone a little more smart dialogue, don't just make them say everything in one go.
Now my criteria based on 3 points each and an extra point.
Animation: 2 (characters Could have a better anatomy, and the background could use just a little more detail)
Audio: 3 (I love the audio and the voice acting. just did't like the way they talk but it's ok)
Story/Script: 1 (Just like i said before too fast for a single scene movie, and not much too)
EP: 1 (I'll give you that extra point because it takes a lot of courage to pull out a series it definately was a little for me but just a little.)
So thats a seven mate, good work.
This is a great review - -just because you didnt prefer the animation you still considered a lot of what WAS done with it which i really appreciate. I shall try to respond accordingly
Animation - you nailed it man - - i have a long way to go - for now its the best i can do to tell the story i have dreamed up - i hope to improve as i go
Audio: 3...scores a little low IMO - i think i have pulled off some of the best audio mixing done in any series on this site and will continue to - it's something i really pride myself on. *wink*
Story:the story will continue to move VERY fast - no time for viewers to be bored or wondering whats going on with the plot- tough cookies on that one mate - its love it or hate it HEHEHEHE
EP: haha thanks for the extra cred homie
thanks again - i believe you will be one of the people that will turn over to my dark side as the series progresses and the characters i have written will win you over.
Too rtil-ish and O-Ovinnie-ish
just saying, both styles are great but i found them kinda gay.
check them out, you'll know what i'm talking about.
it was alright tho.
But, What does it mean?
It's so bright, so vivid...
I didn't like the blond girl's voice, it seemed a little old.
The art did not convince me at all. you should get a easy to draw style, maybe it'll look better.
anyways i'm looking up for this.
seriously LMAO!!!! thats cool man
This is genious!!
I'm taking one point away because of the ammount of haters u have...
... (DOT DOT DOT)
It was a really good game but it should have be an interactive movie.
You got a Five BTW.
I found this like really offensive...
For americans, but is really hard to get to the end, i'll stop playing it.
learn2shoot n dodge
Rally cool game.
I really loved the fact that you can throw your sword and one hit kill them, but once you loose your weapon you are really weak, also there are some anoying furry creatures that sucks.
everything else is just fine, the tutorial, the gnomes perfect.
I Imagine this as...
A skeleton dancing party, maybe some monsters too.
Dracula's theme song.
Good rithm, this i what i'll be hearing in some vamp's house.
Thank you! That means that I caught the feel that I was gong for with the song.
Wow just wow.
I was specting this from you, Pure Perfection Like always.
Still asking my self why you're not famous.
It sounds like a name out from an old fighting game. I actually do that to my girls and then give'em real names like in this case something like "Elleonor [Insert Random Last Name Here]"
Well, at least they're still powerfull.
Can't tell how jealous I'm feeling about them right now.
I've already help... a small help but you know.
BTW, you did a very good job on the non-coloured stuff in the background makes the girl and the woman pop out. I'm still missing your old stuff though. But I loved the "I Skull Japan" title.
Im curious what you mean with "old stuff" ?
Kinda getting use to...
This is a tastefull drawing.
keep the good stuff up.
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