Sure that was something
A little too animeish for my taste, it was kinda obvious where all was going. The blind guy out of the sudden just say I'm from another planet, in a team, planet needs your help, evil bad guy. The thing is that this story is not attractive (well actually this movie as a trailer/prologue is not) could need some pulishing.
By now your animation were really good what happened here, looked like you had a need to get this one done quickly.
Try to give everyone a little more smart dialogue, don't just make them say everything in one go.
Now my criteria based on 3 points each and an extra point.
Animation: 2 (characters Could have a better anatomy, and the background could use just a little more detail)
Audio: 3 (I love the audio and the voice acting. just did't like the way they talk but it's ok)
Story/Script: 1 (Just like i said before too fast for a single scene movie, and not much too)
EP: 1 (I'll give you that extra point because it takes a lot of courage to pull out a series it definately was a little for me but just a little.)
So thats a seven mate, good work.
This is a great review - -just because you didnt prefer the animation you still considered a lot of what WAS done with it which i really appreciate. I shall try to respond accordingly
Animation - you nailed it man - - i have a long way to go - for now its the best i can do to tell the story i have dreamed up - i hope to improve as i go
Audio: 3...scores a little low IMO - i think i have pulled off some of the best audio mixing done in any series on this site and will continue to - it's something i really pride myself on. *wink*
Story:the story will continue to move VERY fast - no time for viewers to be bored or wondering whats going on with the plot- tough cookies on that one mate - its love it or hate it HEHEHEHE
EP: haha thanks for the extra cred homie
thanks again - i believe you will be one of the people that will turn over to my dark side as the series progresses and the characters i have written will win you over.
Too rtil-ish and O-Ovinnie-ish
just saying, both styles are great but i found them kinda gay.
check them out, you'll know what i'm talking about.
it was alright tho.
But, What does it mean?
It's so bright, so vivid...
I didn't like the blond girl's voice, it seemed a little old.
The art did not convince me at all. you should get a easy to draw style, maybe it'll look better.
anyways i'm looking up for this.
seriously LMAO!!!! thats cool man
This was the funniest thing I've seen this month.
The animation was pro and smooth and i like the style.
But the voice acting sucked like hell.
Me and my friends...
That's exactly how we act day one.
I really like how you draw maste chief, he's not even 5%of the game story. ( but it was awesome.)
I'll be givin you a nine, but somehow at the end looked like youtube poop, but it was funny anyways.
I really feel conected to both guys.
So you actually get payed for this?
Was a nice joke the line that said " you should still probably pay with money"
But seriously you get payed?
This is a good tutorial.
But not working in all cases.
Adgetive and noun has to be the most simple way to create a name that not just make your acount looks decent but also senseless. Yotam has an argue telling he just not found easy to create it, but also has a movie about the story of his screen name, probably just a made up story but funny.
this may have been a lot of help for those who are just NinjaAssesx7000xkillerover9000 users I've never been one of those thank god.
This tutorial was excellent.
I've always li this kind...
of jokes since i was 5, they are simple and they're so frikin funny.
also the animation was good the backgrounds, but the voices... you know what i mean. i took 2 points because of that fact, one for each voice.
Oh shit men!!
I was about to say: Breath through your fucking nose you Dumb Bitch!! you're annoying everyone in here including me... damn it.
you should it add it a sex scene, but instead of horny screams used hard Harmonica sounds.
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